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You have recently started working in a new company. Write a letter to your English Speaking friend. In you letter • Explain why you changed jobs • Describe your new job • Tell him/her your other news

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Dear John, Hope you're doing great! It's been a long time since we had a talk, my busy schedule kept me busy. I wanted to share some good news that, recently I've changed my job. My previous work used to involve the field of marketing, though, it was
also
 interesting but not specifically in my field of interest,
however
, I always wanted to pursue a career in digital marketing. You know what! the new position is in my area of expertise and passion. The current work consists of digital advertising, and social media marketing
as well as
 designing and implementing marketing plans.
Apart from
this
, I'm
also
 very excited to inform you about my latest workplace location, which is just 50 miles away from your hometown. Hopefully, we can often plan to meet each other on weekends. Waiting to hear from you back about your well-being and excitement. Yours loving Vik
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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