Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important enviromental problems.

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,

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the environmental

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problem

has attracted

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numerous

controversies and drawn the attention

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the public. Some people believe that the key environmental

problem

of our era is the loss of certain kinds of

plants

and

animals

,

while

others argue that there are more essential

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environmental

problems

. In my eyes, I hold the view of

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.

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, it has been argued why I think

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essential

enviromental

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environmental

problems

. Admittedly, the loss of certain kinds of

plants

and

animals

is

one

part of environmental

problems

.

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,

one

well-known biologist, Lucy Blair

said''With

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said with

the increasing demand

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constructive building and

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the government

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government

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governments

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are exploring more and more natural land into useful

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for

human

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. Absolutely, it damages deeply the inhabitant of

plants

and

animals

'' It is

thus

clearly shown that the key environmental

problem

includes the loss of certain kinds of

plants

and

animals

.

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still

reckon there are more essential

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environmental

problems

. As far as the environment

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concerned, the ultimate aim of the

enviroment

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environment

is to make our earth

harmony

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and peaceful.

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,

one

recent article published in Nelson Magazine revealed that air pollution

also

causes

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environmental

problem

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, which makes our

enviroment

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environment

worse to survive.

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climate change is

also

part of

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enviromental

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environmental

problem

. As we can see, the sea level is higher and higher these years.

In addition

,

enviromental

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environmental

problem

is

also

strongly linked to the

dizasters

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disasters

disaster

like flooding and drought.

Therefore

, there is no doubt that there are more essential

enviromental

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environmental

problems

.

To sum up

, I believe that there are more essential

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environmental

problems

due to

the reasons

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above. In order to address

this

issue, the government and people should make

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concerted effort to find

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solution.