Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important enviromental problems.

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the environmental
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problem
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has attracted
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the public. Some people believe that the key environmental
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of our era is the loss of certain kinds of
plants
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and
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others argue that there are more essential
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. In my eyes, I hold the view of
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essential
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environmental
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. Admittedly, the loss of certain kinds of
plants
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and
animals
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is
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part of environmental
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.
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,
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well-known biologist, Lucy Blair
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the increasing demand
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the government
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government
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are exploring more and more natural land into useful
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. Absolutely, it damages deeply the inhabitant of
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and
animals
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'' It is
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clearly shown that the key environmental
problem
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includes the loss of certain kinds of
plants
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and
animals
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.
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, I
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still
reckon there are more essential
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environmental
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. As far as the environment
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concerned, the ultimate aim of the
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environment
is to make our earth
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and peaceful.
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recent article published in Nelson Magazine revealed that air pollution
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causes
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environmental
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, which makes our
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environment
worse to survive.
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climate change is
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enviromental
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environmental
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. As we can see, the sea level is higher and higher these years.
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,
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environmental
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is
also
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strongly linked to the
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disasters
disaster
like flooding and drought.
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, there is no doubt that there are more essential
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environmental
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.
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, I believe that there are more essential
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environmental
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due to
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the reasons
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above. In order to address
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