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My friend think about going to camp this summer and need some advice

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Dear Sara I was so pleased to hear that from you. It would be a great idea to camping during the holidays, even if you do not have any experience.I am definitely sure you will enjoy your vacation since it is like a discovery and I know your curious side. 
However
, there are some points that you should consider them.
Firstly
, you have to care about
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hygiene,
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portable toilets.
Secondly
, insects and reptiles are all over nature. I am used to using specific pills before entering nature to prevent any attack.
Finally
, if the weather becomes rainy, you will probably pass you your time in your tent. Hopefully, I will have taken my exam by
this
 summer. So, It is a wonderful chance for me to accompany you. I always welcome any camping invitation, and I can
also
 provide a tent for both of us. Thanks again for being in touch with me. Please let me know if there is no problem with being with you in the camp. Cheers Narges
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