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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

#traffic #companies #factories #employees #countryside
A lot of major cities are facing the big problem of traffic and housing because of large
companies
 and factories.
This
 leads to a solution that those facilities and their employees could be moved to the
countryside
.
However
, there are many
arguements
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arguments
 around
this
 way because of some reasons. In the
countryside
, there are
also
 people with their houses and farms. So when a large factory is moved to these areas, many farmers will strongly disapprove. They will not
ready
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 to give up their benefits from their farming lands which may bring the highest amount of income.
Moreover
, manufacturing industries affect the environment more negatively than agriculture.
For example
, emissions and waste productions which are released
from
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 large
companies
 bring various problems like
greenhouse
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the greenhouse
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 effect or global climate change.
However
, I really think that moving large
companies
 and factories to the
countryside
 is a vital solution to help many big cities escape from heavy traffic or housing. The population in urban areas is much higher than that in
the
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suburban. When the government decides to transfer industrial structures to the
countryside
, the decrease
of
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 the number of people can open a possibility for many cities to handle a huge amount of
problem
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problems
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.
In addition
,
lands
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the lands
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 in the
countryside
 are much wider than in the city.
Therefore
, enlarging working areas can benefit the
companies
 to develop the ability of producing. And if we look at
this
 solution in a macro way, the domestic economy would change in a positive way. In conclusion,
although
 moving large
companies
, factories and their employees to the
countryside
 can have some small problems, we can hardly deny that it
bring
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 a lot of other benefits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • housing problems
  • countryside
  • large companies
  • factories
  • employees
  • urban areas
  • land availability
  • relocate
  • stimulate economic development
  • challenges
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • rural areas
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