You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In you letter: Introduce yourself Explain what is wrong tin the furniture Say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Collins, My name is Jimena Ilaria, your tenant from unit 2 on 11 Hill Street Road. It has been three months since we moved with my family to

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flat. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with some of the furniture. My family and I noticed a few days ago that the fridge was not cooling properly,

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situation the food rotted really fast, having to throw some food in the bin. We are

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not satisfied with the television in the main bedroom. For some reason every time we try to watch something on the tv, it turns off every thirty minutes, ending up moving to the living room to use the one

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there. I would really appreciate

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you can replace or fix them as soon as possible. I have the contact number of a guy who fixes and sells second-hand appliances, he might be able to fix them. Let me know if you would like me to send his contact number. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely,

jimeilariaTue Apr 25 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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6 paragraphs

178 words

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