how does the map describe the change of village park ?
This
diagram shows the change of
the village Change preposition
in
park
, it contrasts the difference after 10 years.
10 years ago, there were only two tennis courts in front of the entrance, and the park
doubled the number of tennis courts now. At the west of the park
is the car park
, once it only can accommodate 20 cars, but it can accommodate 50 cars now.
The pond was located north of the park
, it becomes a boating lake now. On the left side of the lake, the park
adds a picnic area
for the guests.
There were woods in this
park
too, Correct pronoun usage
which is
is
located to the southwest of the Unnecessary verb
apply
park
. Now there is only half of the woods still left here and the park
built a cafe shop in the left woods to sell drinks. Anotherother
half of Correct your spelling
Another other
wood
became the toilet and there is a new Correct article usage
the wood
children
's soft play area
nearby the toilet now. The children
's soft area
is beside the children
's play area
. The children
's play area
never move location during these ten yearsSubmitted by wujingyun843 on
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