how does the map describe the change of village park ?

how does the map describe the change of village park ?
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the village
park
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, it contrasts the difference after 10 years. 10 years ago, there were only two tennis courts in front of the entrance, and the
park
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doubled the number of tennis courts now. At the west of the
park
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is the car
park
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, once it only can accommodate 20 cars, but it can accommodate 50 cars now. The pond was located north of the
park
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, it becomes a boating lake now. On the left side of the lake, the
park
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adds a picnic
area
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for the guests. There were woods in
this
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park
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too,
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which is
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is
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located to the southwest of the
park
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. Now there is only half of the woods still left here and the
park
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built a cafe shop in the left woods to sell drinks.
Anotherother
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Another other
half of
wood
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the wood
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became the toilet and there is a new
children
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's soft play
area
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nearby the toilet now. The
children
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's soft
area
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is beside the
children
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's play
area
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. The
children
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's play
area
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never move location during these ten years

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Linking words: Add some linking words.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park, area, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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