The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps provided highlight the change in
road
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access to a
city
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hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, there had been an enormous transformation of the roads in the three years with the constructions around the hospital
road
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experiencing the most significant make-over. To be specific, there were 3 bus stops on either
side
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of the hospital
road
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in 2017, which had been removed in 2010. In 2017, the eastern
side
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of the hospital
road
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had a
car
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park for hospital staff and the public, it
then
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divided into two
car
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parks in 2010, the
car
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park for staff remained in the same location,
while
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the public
car
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park was relocated to the eastern
side
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of the
city
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hospital. As for the hospital
road
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, with the addition of two roundabouts in 2010. One was on the southern
side
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of the
city
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hospital and the other one was built at the intersection connected with the
city
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road
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.
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, both roundabouts had a
road
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that led to the bus station in 2010.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, side, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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