The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps provided highlight the change in
road
access to a city
hospital in 2007 and 2010. Overall
, there had been an enormous transformation of the roads in the three years with the constructions around the hospital road
experiencing the most significant make-over.
To be specific, there were 3 bus stops on either side
of the hospital road
in 2017, which had been removed in 2010. In 2017, the eastern side
of the hospital road
had a car
park for hospital staff and the public, it then
divided into two car
parks in 2010, the car
park for staff remained in the same location, while
the public car
park was relocated to the eastern side
of the city
hospital.
As for the hospital road
, with the addition of two roundabouts in 2010. One was on the southern side
of the city
hospital and the other one was built at the intersection connected with the city
road
. Furthermore
, both roundabouts had a road
that led to the bus station in 2010.Submitted by 4949angela on
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