The maps illustrate remarkable transformations in the coastal village of Seaville over a 30-year period, starting from 1980.

The maps illustrate remarkable transformations in the coastal village of Seaville over a 30-year period, starting from 1980.
The pie charts compare the
percentage
of
carbohydrates
, protein and fat in three separate types of
diet
, namely average
diet
, healthy
diet
and healthy
diet
for sport. It is obvious that a sports person consumed the highest proportion of
carbohydrates
,
whereas
the figure for fat experienced a contrasting site.
Additionally
, the amount of fat contains the lowest
percentage
in all three kinds of
diet
. As can be seen from the graph,
carbohydrates
were responsible for 60% of a healthy
diet
for sport, which witnessed 20% and 10% respectively higher than the proportion of
carbohydrates
in an average
diet
and a healthy
diet
.
On the other hand
, a common
diet
consumed a larger
percentage
of protein, at 40% than one-third and one-fourth accounting for a healthy
diet
and sportspeople, respectively. Another striking feature is that the
percentage
of fat contained only 15% in the meal of sportspeople in comparison
of
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the same proportion of 20% of other diets.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, carbohydrates, diet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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