Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men's, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career. It is said: "A woman's place is in the home." What do you think?
Women
and men have had different roles in the community since the beginning. Under modern pretexts
these Add a comma
pretexts,
differences
are slowly converging. However
, due to
the genetic inheritance and socio-demographic components, these differences
do exist. Firstly
, men are undoubtedly better adapted genetically to perform physical tasks. Therefore
, the assumption that women
can match men in everything is clearly flawed. The difference between their physical abilities is clearly demonstrated in the sporting arena. Take, for example
, the Olympics or any international sporting event. It can be clearly seen that in these competitions the genders are separated due to
inherent differences
between the sexes. Secondly
, it has been argued that women
are less appreciated in society
due to
their traditional roles in the home. This
statement is true to a certain extent because it largely depends on the society
. In certain traditional societies in Africa, females working is frowned upon and is seen as neglecting the family, whereas
in Afghanistan, in general, females are allowed to do little else but stay at home, being a housewife. Consequently
, a woman’s value is largely dictated by the
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apply
society
, culture and history. Nevertheless
, to state that her place is in the home is widely considered sexist in modern western
societies. Capitalize word
Western
To conclude
, differences
do certainly exist; however
, these are largely through nature. Also
, the role women
may have is usually dictated by other factors, such
as,
religion or Remove the comma
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society
, not ability
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the ability
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