Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men's, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career. It is said: "A woman's place is in the home." What do you think?

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and men have had different roles in the community since the beginning. Under modern
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these
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are slowly converging.
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the genetic inheritance and socio-demographic components, these
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, men are undoubtedly better adapted genetically to perform physical tasks.
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, the assumption that
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can match men in everything is clearly flawed. The difference between their physical abilities is clearly demonstrated in the sporting arena. Take,
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, the Olympics or any international sporting event. It can be clearly seen that in these competitions the genders are separated
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between the sexes.
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are less appreciated in
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their traditional roles in the home.
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. In certain traditional societies in Africa, females working is frowned upon and is seen as neglecting the family,
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in Afghanistan, in general, females are allowed to do little else but stay at home, being a housewife.
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, a woman’s value is largely dictated by
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, culture and history.
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, to state that her place is in the home is widely considered sexist in modern
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societies.
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do certainly exist;
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may have is usually dictated by other factors,
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religion or
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