Topic: Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Nowadays, people residing in different nations have hard contrasting views about eating at their homes or somewhere outside. Today most
humans
prefer buying Use synonyms
food
from restaurants. There are both advantages and disadvantages to the topic. Use synonyms
This
essay will touch upon both the advantages and disadvantages of purchasing Linking Words
food
from outside.
In the beginning, Use synonyms
humans
to prefer buy Use synonyms
food
from outside than cook at Use synonyms
home
first reason of it is they do not want to lose any time Use synonyms
for
cooking. For ,example when they arrive Change preposition
apply
at
Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
home
they do not prefer to cook meals for themselves rather they can easily order from outside. Add an article
the home
This
behaviour gains them extra time and energy. So they can rest or deal with Linking Words
another thing
at Fix the agreement mistake
other things
home
. Use synonyms
Also
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this
,way they get rid of dishes and marketing stuff. For all these reasons most Linking Words
humans
prefer order outside.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
this
behaviour has so Linking Words
much
disadvantages too. Most of the Change the quantifier
many
food
coming from outside is not healthy. For ,instance people which is eating Use synonyms
food
from restaurants every day Use synonyms
are
very harmful to their health and Correct subject-verb agreement
is
also
body. When we look at the other perspective Linking Words
this
is not affordable for most Linking Words
humans
. Because foods which are selling from outside is very expensive. All of these reasons purchasing Use synonyms
food
is very disadvantageous for both health and Use synonyms
also
the economy.
In a nutshell, Linking Words
this
increased trend is not a good way for Linking Words
humans
because cooking at Use synonyms
home
is healthier and cheaper than buying outside. The harm of Use synonyms
this
behaviour is more than the benefits. So, in my ,opinion Linking Words
this
action is not reasonable for mankind.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...