The graph above shows the use of land lines and mobile phones in 6 different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph gives us information about how many mobile phones and landlines are used in 6 different countries, namely America, China, Russia, Japan, Sweden and
Turkey
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that mobile phones are less used by American people
, whereas
they are mostly put to use in Turkey
, Sweden and Japan. Another interesting point is that landlines are useful in China and Turkey
the most.
Looking at the details, it can be mentioned that Japanese people
use the lowest percentage of landlines, less than 45% of people
. By contrast
, in China and ,Turkey
they are used by more than 67,5 per cent. In terms of Russian people
, the percentage of use landline and mobile phones are quite similar, approximately 50 per cent and a little bit more than 67,5% respectively.
To conclude
, it can be highlighted that mobiles are used by a lot of people
in different countries.Submitted by gulnara.7676 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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