The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparizons where relevant

The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparizons where relevant
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The diagram compares figures for the
amount
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of
coffee
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produced in
Brazil
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,
Colombia
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, Indonesia, and Vietnam over the period of 20 years starting in 1990. It can be clearly seen that the total
amount
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of
coffee
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produced in
Brazil
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is by far the highest value throughout the period shown.
Also
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,
while
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the
amount
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of
coffee
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production in Indonesia and Vietnam rose gradually, the
figure
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for
Colombia
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fell steadily. In 1990, around 0.7
million
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tonnes
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of
coffee
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were produced in
Brazil
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,
this
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figure
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is about 0.1
million
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tonnes
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higher than that of
Colombia
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in that year. In the year 1995, the
amount
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of
coffee
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production in
Brazil
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rose dramatically, to 1
million
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tonnes
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,
meanwhile
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the
figure
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for
Colombia
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dropped slightly by 0.1
million
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tonnes
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, to around 0.5
million
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tonnes
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. The following years from 2000 to 2010 witnessed a sharp rise in
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coffee
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production in
Brazil
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, to about 1.5
million
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tonnes
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and 1.9
million
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tonnes
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respectively.
Whereas
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, the
figure
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for Columbia decreased slowly to 0.4
million
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tonnes
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and 0.3
million
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tonnes
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in 2000 and 2010 respectively.
On the other hand
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, there was an upward trend in the total
amount
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of
coffee
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produced in Indonesia and Vietnam, but the total values for these two countries remain at 0.4
million
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tonnes
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and lower.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, coffee, brazil, colombia, figure, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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