The number of indigenuos tribes living traditional lives in the world's rainforests is decreasing. Within a few decades the last of these indigenuos tribes may have disappeared forever. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to prevent it from happening?

The swarm of traditional people who

are insistently continue

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living in jungles is diminishing as time goes by. There has been a sharp drop in the amount of their regions. In

this

essay, I will look at the reasons for

this

and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the

problem

is that people from megacities invade their zone by cutting down trees

in

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the aim of being used in wood-related businesses.

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, these green locations are

being experienced

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a decrease in

region's

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the region's

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hectare

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.

In addition

, they lose their habitats and

and

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have to settle in small

amount

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. To tackle

this

problem

, the

authority

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authorities

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should introduce strict laws against companies which can do logging illegally. Another trouble is that an exceedingly increasing number of hunters kill

animal

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animals

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in the name of

exciting

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pastime;

furthermore

, not only do hunters slay endangered species but they

also

get

inhabitants'

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inhabitants

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chance

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to have a meal since their nutrition relies on wild animals.

This

problem

could be addressed by the government by way of sentencing hunters to prison and

fine

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a large

aaray

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amount

of money. The

last

difficulty is that human activities have unbelievably devastating Impacts on

rainforest's

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the rainforest's

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water supply. What's more, most industrial waste

are

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pouring

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into these outstanding remaining habitats' liquid source so as to get rid of harmful rubbish paying attention that water contaminates and

as a result

makes inhabitants

poison

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. A solution for the government is to preclude inconsiderate industries from pouring dangerous trash into rivers. In conclusion, human activities

such

as logging, hunting,

throwing

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and throwing

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away rubbish have insurmountable effects on both the

invironment

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environment

and residents.

This

is a serious

problem

, and unless we block negative situations

to go

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on,

indigenuos

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indigenous

tribes are highly likely

die

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out in the future. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the

problem

lies with conscious people and the government.