Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals because individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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environmental protection is a shared
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responsibility
between individuals and their government. It starts
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a very tiny things
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, those things reflect how much you respect
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nature and how you want to enjoy it clean. If all of us tried to love and protect our
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environment
, we will find ourselves
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do the right. I believe that every big
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evidence
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you with a
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plastic
bottels
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bottles
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nature and fish
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know that the solvation is very easy to keep away
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problem
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you to take a decision to stop using
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bags anymore, and try to
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recycle
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the
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bottles
and cans. Tecnacily, we can see that the
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protection
of the
nautre
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nature
is not our role, but
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happen without
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in it
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positively
. Start by yourself and
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your
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children
and your family to always keep
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our
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minds
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that my behaviour now, can
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my future. God save and bless our
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nature
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental protection
  • responsibility
  • politicians
  • individuals
  • large-scale
  • policies
  • regulations
  • impact
  • corporations
  • environmentally friendly practices
  • resources
  • expertise
  • collective efforts
  • difference
  • combination
  • crucial
  • effective
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