You missed one of the most important lessons of your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter apologize for not attending explain why you did not attend say what you will do to make up for it

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Dear Sir, I am writing to make an apology for not attending one of the important lectures of the semester. Unfortunately,when I was driving to the college I happen to meet with an accident and broke my leg.I was immediately rushed to the hospital by the local people.On arrival at the

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hospital I was unconscious for about thirty minutes.When I regained my consciousness I found myself on the hospital bed with a plaster placed on my leg.The doctor has advised me not to move for about three weeks till my wound is healed.I was depressed and sad and was just thinking about how can I make up for the lecture which I was unable to attend. My friend has promised me to share his notes via email I am happy that I will be able to access the recorded lecture.

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will attend extra lectures after school to compensate for the loss. I hope you will accept my apology and allow me to attend the next course with some extra time. Thanking you. Yours Sincerely, Nida.

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Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

187 words

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