The table below shows the waste production in 6 different countries over a twenty year period,

The table below shows the waste production in 6 different countries over a twenty year period,
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the waste production in 6 different countries over a twenty year period,
The table shows the changes in the number of waste yield in six
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nations from 1980 to 2000.
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the chart, the years from 1980 to 2000 saw a rise in the rate of lost production
the
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five countries. They are Ireland, Japan, Poland, Portugal and the US. Only
Korea
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Korea's
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rubbish turnout decreased from 1990 to 2000. The figure
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trash birthing in
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Poland and Portugal remained stable from 1980 to 2000. It can be noticed that
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Ireland had the lowest
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squander output only
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0.8 million tonnes,
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the largest in the US achieved 192 million tonnes and has been the highest in the past 20-year period.
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, we can see that in 2000, Ireland and Portugal had the same refuse production of 5 million tons.
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, with the development of society, various types of garbage are increasing. Developed
country
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countries
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like the US
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have more rubbish compared to other nations. So I hope the world doesn’t forget to reduce the
appear
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of waste
while
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making progress.

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