The chart below show how frequently people in US ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 2013

The chart below show how frequently people in US ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 2013
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The bar chart details fast
food
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consumption in the United States in 2003,2006, and 2013. Looking at from an
overall
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perspective it is readily apparent that frequent consumption of fast
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, defined at least once a
week
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, generally became less common though having fast
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once a
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or once or twice a month remained the dominant trend. The only exception to
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pattern is not eating fast
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, which declined. Looking first
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the most pervasive habits in 2003, 31% of individuals ate fast
food
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once a
week
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compared to 30% eating it once or twice a month. From there, these trends diverged with those eating once a
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rising to 34% in 2006 and
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falling precipitously to 27% by 2013. eating once or twice a month fell to 25% and
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surged to 34% in the final year. The figure for those eating fast
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several times a
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stood at 17% in 2003, rose to 20% in 2006 and dipped to a low of 15% in 2013.
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, in 2003, 13% of individuals consumed fast
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a few times a year and these numbers for every day and never were nearly identical with the former at 4% in 2003 and
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3% and the latter starting at 5% and reaching a low of 4% in both 2006 and 2013.
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