Some people feel that developments in science are happening so fast that it is difficult for people to appreciate the effects of such advances .Others feel we should trust scientists more and stop worrying .Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Now in 21 century, science is developing rapidly and in many cases, those developments are not
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to show step by step to
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.So it's hard to understand and got
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appreciation from people
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people are believed there is no need to
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and should
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the science.In my opinion, in
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our young generations will made them stop
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and
to
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accept the
scientists
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advences
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advances
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. We can see the science benefits in many ways in our daily life ,
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as Electricity, Machines , transportation systems and
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the medical field as well .Electric and transportation are important in our daily life nowadays ,it's made our life easier and
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as well as
in
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field , now
scientists
are found the new medication and new treatments for serious
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Cancer disease , those research
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the Cancer patients
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longer.Another good example is
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COVID -19
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COVID-19
in 2020.During
this
pandemic
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we got the different types of vaccines in a short time .
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all benefits
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from the
scientists
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research.
On the other hand
, Some people argue that we should
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scientists
instead
of
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complaining
about their
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.Some developments
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happening so fast and can be
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about that ,
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we can see the results and should trust them. In conclusion,
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personal opinion, we can believe
scientists
and support their idea as well.
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aslo
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also
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to monitor
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those developments.
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