Some people feel that developments in science are happening so fast that it is difficult for people to appreciate the effects of such advances .Others feel we should trust scientists more and stop worrying .Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Now in 21 century, science is developing rapidly and in many cases, those developments are not

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to show step by step to

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.So it's hard to understand and got

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appreciation from people

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scientists

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people are believed there is no need to

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and should

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the science.In my opinion, in

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our young generations will made them stop

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scientists

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advences

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. We can see the science benefits in many ways in our daily life ,

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the medical field as well .Electric and transportation are important in our daily life nowadays ,it's made our life easier and

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medical

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field , now

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are found the new medication and new treatments for serious

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longer.Another good example is

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COVID -19

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COVID-19

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we got the different types of vaccines in a short time .

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research.

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, Some people argue that we should

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scientists

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complaining

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.Some developments

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happening so fast and can be

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we can see the results and should trust them. In conclusion,

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personal opinion, we can believe

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and support their idea as well.

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also

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to monitor

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those developments.

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Apr 26, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

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