Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People have different views about whether students should start learning a foreign language in
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in
school
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or
it
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is better to start with a higher
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after saving some time.In
this
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essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion. On the one hand, there are a number of people who believe that students should
learning
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learn
be learning

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a foreign
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lenguage
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language

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a higher
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more useful. Early in
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pupils have a lot of tasks and they do not
enough
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have enough

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energy for learning a foreign
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lenguage
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language

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.
For example
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, every pupil in the first
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learn their own
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lenguage
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language

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and learn writing, reading and
other kind
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another kind
other kinds

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of
education
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educational

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tasks. If they
try
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totry

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learn
extra
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an extra

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lenguage
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language

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, they will be tired and it
have
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has

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negative
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a negative

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effect
for
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on

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pupils
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pupils'
pupil's

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health.
This
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reason a lot of
countries
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countries'
country's

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government
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governments

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and parents do not risk with their children On the other hand, I support the opinion of those who argue that student learning a
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lenguage
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language

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early in
school
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is very useful and it
help
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helps

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them
their
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in their

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study. A lot of
depeloped
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developed

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countries
learning
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learn

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a foreign
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lenguage
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language

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very early in
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,
becouse
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because

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their children learn their own
mother
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mother's

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language

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lenguage
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in
the
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apply

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kindergarden
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kindergarten

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.
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is a good way for
student
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students

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becouse
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because

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foreign
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lenguage
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languages

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is
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improve their
education
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knowladge
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knowledge

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. So they can find information with extra
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lenguage
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that very comfortable their study.
Then
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they in higher
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do not
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spend

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their time
for
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learning extra
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language

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lenguage
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and
this
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time they learn more news about their speciality In conclusion, even though some people regard students should
learning
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learn

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a
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language
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lenguage
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language

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in
higher
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a higher
the higher

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in
school
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is
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as

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more useful than early in
school
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, I consider that they are advantageous for some factors

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • cultural awareness
  • effective language acquisition
  • early exposure
  • natural pronunciation
  • intonation
  • foundational literacy skills
  • multilingual education
  • intensive study
  • foundational understanding
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