Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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people say that

graffiti

art should be allowed in cities

while

others think it must be

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prohibition

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. Well , I think either side has accurate reasons for their notions. In

this

essay , I will discuss both sides' opinions. First of all ,

graffiti

is a kind of street art. It is a painting

that is

being created by using spray paints. I would like to say

graffiti

works seem more attractive than other drawings. And there are some artists who create really magnificent

graffiti

artworks.

In addition

, the main point

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the

graffiti

work is

domenstrate

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demonstrate

demonstrated

the most considerable concerns of the public. So , I suppose the most rates of people who want that

graffiti

should not

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be banned are normal citizens. Well, actually I can not blame the other people who think that

the

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graffiti

is a bad thing because

besides

the good

graffiti

artists

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there are

also

painters who draw

graffities

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graffiti

which

contain

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nudity ,

violance

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violence

, self-harm etc. In that

case

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who see those wild pictures will want

authories

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authorises

authorities

to ban these drawings because we should consider that children can be influenced by them

To conclude

, in my

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graffities

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graffiti

are very different from other paintings

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its style.

However

, as I mentioned

graffiti

paintings can be

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and harmful at the same time.

Therefore

, I suggest government

to

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create special areas for

graffiti

painters. It can

also

impact the get attention of tourists to different places

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cities. So, I definitely think that

graffities

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graffiti

do not have to be prohibited.