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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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Dear Derek, Hope
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 letter finds you in radiant health and best of
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apply
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spirits. First of all, I would like to thank you for
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your appreciation
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 of my hard
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 towards
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the project.
Secondly
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, I'm planning to take a 5-month time off to explore
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deeper into AWS Cloud technologies. I'm planning to enroll
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AWS
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the AWS
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 Associate
course
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 in Softtech Solutions, the
course
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 duration is 4 months and after completion of the
course
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, they will conduct an exam and
awarded
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 with a certificate. Once, I
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 with Cloud technologies, I will improve our static
work
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 to
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automation
 process.
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, it helps us to reduce the long
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 hours and
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 we may gain some benefits from the company. In future, the AWS
course
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 might help us to
work
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 on more projects with
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 clients and it could be
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beneficial
 for the team
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the company
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company
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 annual growth. Kindly grant me 5-month leave to study new skills. I look forward to hearing from you soon for the approval. Yours Sincerely, Naga Swetha
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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