Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to living in a big apartment building. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today’s populated world where a place for living can be one of the vital issues in each society, for some is more favourable to live in large apartments

although

others believe living in towers can be depressing. I tend to advocate the former

however

the latter has the right to somehow.

While

for some people is difficult to live in a tall building as they think it can be demanding to do chores in

such

a huge and high-rise accommodation, particularly when they live on their own or a few households live together.

Moreover

, for a quiet family is annoying to live in an apartment with many flats and units where some neighbours are noisy.

This

situation can make quite an inconvenient place for alone inhabitants. Some are keen on living in a large apartment. They can have a feeling of pleasure when they find it spacious enough to have a party or gathering with their members of family and friends.

Moreover

, a skyscraper can give you a stunning overlook of the city which is very amusing at night.

In addition

, having more rooms allows you to make fun for households or guests;

for example

, installing a huge LCD in one of the rooms creates a small cinema at home or putting a ping-pong table makes an entertaining room for the members of the family. In conclusion, despite the small drawback of living in high multi-storey apartments makes it sometimes frustrating for the members, there are many benefits with it

such

as having a pleasurable time with households and friends;

therefore

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fun places outside of the home so spending more time in high quality at a large house can improve family’s ties.