The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The bar graph depicts about
minutes
of telephone calls in the united kingdom from 1995 to 2002 and it is divided into three categories ( Local fixed lines, national and international fixed lines, and mobile call calls) As an overview, a call by fixed line is maximum and it increased till 2999
then
started declined
overall
it followed the decreased trend.
While
,
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national and international mobile calls followed an increased trend.
Minutes
of calls by local line was more than 70
billion
in 1995 and it was the highest in 1999 with 90
billion
.
Then
it declined and in the end, it was around 70
billion
.
Moreover
, national and international
minutes
of calls were between 30 to 40
billion
nevertheless
it started increasing and reached 60
billion
in 2002. All calls
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the lowest in 1995 with less than 10
billion
minutes
but it followed
increased
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trend and in the year
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2002 it reached more than 40
billion
minutes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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