The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduates students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
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British graduates and postgraduates after leaving college in 2008.
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Overall
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study was the most significant trend among graduates. Linking Words
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work
represented the least number of Use synonyms
students
in both charts.
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study was by far more than others with almost, 30000 Linking Words
students
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while
the voluntary Linking Words
work
was six times lower than Use synonyms
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figure and showed the lowest point with 3500 Linking Words
students
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the figures for part-time Linking Words
work
and unemployment were almost the same, 17735 and 16235 Use synonyms
students
respectively.
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further
study had more Linking Words
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than part-time Use synonyms
work
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by
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students
. The lowest trend was Use synonyms
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voluntary Correct article usage
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work
with 345 Use synonyms
students
and the second lowest point was Use synonyms
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unemployment. Correct article usage
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However
, it was three times higher than voluntary Linking Words
work
with 1625 Use synonyms
students
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