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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduates students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduates students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
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The bar charts
illustrates
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the
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British graduates and postgraduates after leaving college in 2008.
Overall
, it can be observed that the figure for
further
 study was the most significant trend among graduates.
Also
, the figure for voluntary
work
 represented the least number of
students
 in both charts. It is notable that the
further
 study was by far more than others with almost, 30000
students
,
while
 the voluntary
work
 was six times lower than
this
 figure and showed the lowest point with 3500
students
.
Likewise
,
it is clear that
 the figures for part-time
work
 and unemployment were almost the same, 17735 and 16235
students
 respectively. There was a slight
diffence
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difference
 between
two
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the two
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 figures,
further
 study had more
students
 than part-time
work
,
by
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approximately 200
students
. The lowest trend was
the
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voluntary
work
 with 345
students
 and the second lowest point was
the
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unemployment.
However
, it was three times higher than voluntary
work
 with 1625
students
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pursue
  • enhance
  • skillset
  • gain experience
  • expand knowledge
  • acquire
  • develop
  • employment prospects
  • participate
  • contribute
  • job market
  • seek
  • apply for
  • opportunities
  • gain valuable insights
  • explore
  • unemployment rate
  • entrepreneurship
  • set up
  • initiate
  • establish
  • start a business
  • self-employment
  • chart
  • data
  • statistics
  • graduate
  • postgraduate
  • students
  • college
  • full-time work
  • leaving
  • further studies
  • part-time work
  • internships
  • volunteer work
  • travel
  • starting own business
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