The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphic illustrates how is
electricity
powered by geothermal energy in a geothermal power plant. The
overall
process of generating
electricity
can be split into 5 key points. The first
point
is cold
water
, which should be pumped down to 4.5km deep underground, it should be injected until it's ready to heat which is the second key
point
. The third
point
is waiting for the
water
flows through a distance of the geothermal zone(hot rocks) naturally until it's ready to use. The following fourth
point
is pumping the hot
water
up into a condenser which is built on the ground to condense the
water
into steam. The
last
step is driving the turbine by the steam from the condenser to power the generator to produce
electricity
, which can
hence
be transmitted to thousands of households through an electrical tower. To summarise, the method of producing
electricity
by geothermal power is to use the heat feature of hot rocks underground to heat up cold
water
,
then
use the hot
water
to drive an electrical generator to yield
electricity
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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