The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the estimation's proportion of region.
illiteracy
in the previous year in terms of two criteria; gender
as well as
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen, that the illiteracy
rate
of the female gender
is remarkably towering in 3 regions, stating ; South Asia, Arab countries and sub-Saharan African regions, while
in the developed countries, the illiteracy
issue nearly exists.
Glancing at the bar char reveals that, the female gender
represents the highest proportion compared to the male rate
in all regions; South Asia with approximately 55% while
the Male rate
is roughly over 30%, Arab states come in the second stage with nearly 52% of illiterate female, while
nearly less than 30% of Male, speaking of sub-Saharan Africa illustrates roughly the same percentage as the Arabic states with less than 50% among female gender
and slightly over 30% among Male gender
,
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, as well as Latin America,
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Latin America come in the last
ranking before the developed countries with approximately 2% , the rate
of illiteracy
is nearly similar in the Caribbean among females and males with 11%, however
in Oceania, females represent 20% while
males only less than 10%,Submitted by creativedesign1a9 on
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