The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the estimation's proportion of
illiteracy
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in the previous year in terms of two criteria;
gender
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as well as
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the
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region.
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, it can be clearly seen, that the
illiteracy
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rate
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of the female
gender
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is remarkably towering in 3 regions, stating ; South Asia, Arab countries and sub-Saharan African regions,
while
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in the developed countries, the
illiteracy
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issue nearly exists. Glancing at the bar char reveals that, the female
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represents the highest proportion compared to the male
rate
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in all regions; South Asia with approximately 55%
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the Male
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is roughly over 30%, Arab states come in the second stage with nearly 52% of illiterate female,
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nearly less than 30% of Male, speaking of sub-Saharan Africa illustrates roughly the same percentage as the Arabic states with less than 50% among female
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and slightly over 30% among Male
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, East Asia
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, as well as Latin America,
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as well as
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Latin America come in the
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ranking before the developed countries with approximately 2% , the
rate
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of
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is nearly similar in the Caribbean among females and males with 11%,
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in Oceania, females represent 20%
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males only less than 10%,
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, gender, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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