Your family is going to celebrate an occassion and your child needs a day off from school. Write a letter to the head master of the school. What the occassion is? Why it is importnat that your child attends the celebration? How your child is going to make up for the missed lessons.

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Dear

sir

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Sir

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/madam, I am writing

this

letter to seek your permission for my child for three days' leave. It is essential for him to attend the retirement party of his grandfather

that is

going to be organised in Banglore. We have been living in an extended family and celebrating every occasion with great pomp and show. Since Sheldon Jackson currently studying in 6th Alpha has been promoted to the next class, we were unable to visit Banglore. Now on

this

auspicious day of his grandfather's ,retirement he is willing to throw a party. I want my full family to attend

this

event and Sheldon is an apple of his grandfather's eye, so it's my cordial request to let him attend

this

function.

Moreover

, I will take complete responsibility for my child's lessons. I already told one of his friends to send classwork done during regular school hours. Being fully conscious of his second-term exams, I am requesting you grant him leave for a week. I will access the school portal

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education to even cover up his homework. Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Selina James

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Your family is going to celebrate an occassion and your child needs a day off from school. Write a letter to the head master of the school. What the occassion is? Why it is importnat that your child attends the celebration? How your child is going to make up for the missed lessons.

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