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Some working parents think that childcare centers provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Children generally need love and care for support Now let's talk about the working
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 and need to earn money that's where
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help take care of young stars But I think having
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 take care of the children is a good idea, because that's family
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 won't scold or maltreat their grandchildren,
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 them what should be taught they will make sure when at fault u will be published
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 with love.a grandma will make sure they give the best of their time But
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childcare won't do that to they will make sure
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 pour out anger on you when scolded by their employees.which is bad making the children get scared of them.
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 might leave u at any time which is not good making you
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 employee stranded.the come in and take advantage of the little ones by maltreating them making t
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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