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Some young people like to copy the behavior and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be so? What can it cause?

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Several youths love to imitate the characters and
dressing
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 of people of influence. It's no longer
a news
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 that children
of
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nowadays are seen putting on
the
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apparel like celebrities and incorporating their ways of life
as a result
 of the interest they had
for
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 them.
However
,
this
 can lead to
further
 decadence among the youngsters.
This
 essay will expound
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 with relevant examples and a conclusion. Luminaries are the group of persons that society Accord a lot of
respects
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 for,
this
 inspired several folks mostly
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young people to be their fans and admirers. Intriguing features about them cause a lot of youths to start parodying their attires and
also
 their attitudes. When someone is being cherished whatever
such
 an individual does becomes the
norms
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 for their lovers
that is
 exactly what the case is among our adolescents.
For instance
, a movie star in Nigeria has a particular young girl following her mimicking her gowning and all her values, it became so obvious that the lady was interviewed on social media and she confessed to loving
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her.
The youngster
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are
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 known to fantasize
the
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 ways of life of
notable
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personality
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personalities
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 which have really influenced the robing and manners in
the
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society.
However
,
this
 has degenerated to an alarming rate of decadence amidst the
up coming
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 generation it infiltrated practically every
aspects
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 of their lives especially their dressing pattern and lifestyles.
For example
, our culture embrace women wearing clothes that covers nakedness and men
on the other hand
 are not permitted to put on
jewelries
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 or making their hair but because most female moguls wears half naked clothes and male counterpart
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 on earrings and necklaces, the youths emulating them are now appearing like them which has led to various vices and crimes like raping, harlotry and theft. Conclusively, replicating the dignitaries draping and lifestyles are becoming accentuated in the midst of boys and girls
that is
 basically triggered by passion but has
consequently
 resulted in severe deterioration globally.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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