Completing University education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job.On the the other hand,other people think that getting experience and developing skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

It has been argued by some

people

that

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a graduate is the best

way

to land oneself a good

job

.

While

others believed that developing

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experience

is the best. In my own opinion, I am of the view that getting

experience

and

development

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of

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skills

is the

way

to get a good

job

.

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respect to the

perceptives

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perceptions

of

people

who believed that completing

first

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degree

is the best

way

to get a good

job

.*( you have not

finish

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this

statement)* They have suggested that, ~Admittedly~ decades back having a

first

degree

is the surest

way

to get good jobs with a competitive salary

this

is because there are few who are educated and so if you are graduate you become a hot cake for employers for are struggling to get one in their organization but lately

people

are now enlightened about education as

such

there are thousands of

people

with

first

degree

making the vacancies available more competitive than ever before.

Furthermore

, being a graduate does not

guaranteed

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landing a good

job

because some

organization

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organizations

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give preference to those with higher

degree

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degrees

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like

Masters

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degree

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and PhD

as

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a result making

unemployment

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rate among youths with

first

degree

to

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rise.

On the contrary

, others have argued that getting

experience

and developing

skills

is more important. In my own

perspectives

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,

people

in

this

group are more able to get jobs because

skills

are more marketable in the labour market than

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.

Also

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development

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the development

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of

skills

and

experience

help

individual

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an individual

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to establish themselves by owning their own business Enterprise

unlike

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their counterparts who depends on salary.

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to

this

,

small scale

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business tends to boost the National economy.

Furthermore

, there is continuity in the transfer of Knowledge and

experience

among the younger generation even if they are illiterate as it is not stressful to enrol. Conclusively, completing

University

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education is thought by some

people

to be the

way

to get a good

job

because in their own

opinion

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it helps to land good jobs and

competitive

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a competitive

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salary

while

I am of the opinion that getting

experience

and developing

skills

are more important as

this

help to boost the national economy, continuity of knowledge and

experience

and production of entrepreneurs.