intelligence is the best quality of a leader. Do you agree or disagree?

intelligence is the best quality of a
leader
. Do you agree or disagree?
High
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IQ is most appropriate for
leadership
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a leadership
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role. I disagree with the idea that intellect is the greatest pre-eminent of
leadership
of which there are better
standard
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standards
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where
people
can take part in decision making. There are several reasons why
intelligent
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the intelligent
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leader
is not consider
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the top
most
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apply
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.
Firstly
, no one is an island of knowledge, a situation where
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person
control
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a whole community base on brainpower thereby using power on members which may not be of benefit but rather leave them unsatisfied. Not only does it affect but
also
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harm and injustice to an individual.
Secondly
,
this
type of
leadership
is not
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of the
people
but of the
leader
only which makes an average citizen powerless and hopeless despite the challenges an individual
encounter
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that could be extremely dangerous to their lives. Even with that the
leader
still
lead
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on
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irrespective of
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discomfort and
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it as
best
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way to direct because of the
intelligent
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ability, in my
opinion
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it does not worth a
leader
. I believe there is a better attribute where
human
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participate in
decision making
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. A democratic
leadership
style intelligently
carry
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the subordinate along happily. Is a
leader
of the
people
by the
people
and for the
people
where
individual
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in not unfriendly to one another.
Furthermore
,
ruler
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of
this
kind will enable
human
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humans
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to contribute positively to the given society.
For
example
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humans in our community will have the opportunity to be united and more productive in their various
department
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or
specialty
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and
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will lead to community growth and development. In conclusion, my view is that a
leader
should be liberal,
servant
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of the
people
and
also
give room for
members
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opinion
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. It is wrong to rule a whole nation with one
person
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intelligence.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • informed decisions
  • complex problems
  • anticipate
  • emotional intelligence
  • connect with others
  • inspire
  • manage conflicts
  • wisdom
  • integrity
  • execute ideas
  • empathy
  • resilience
  • motivate
  • unite
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