You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: •Why you want to go away • What you want your neighbor to look after • If there are any problems, then give instructions

#home #week #neighbor #house #•why #instructions

Dear Amandeep

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, I am writing

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letter because I give you my house's

responsibilties

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responsibilities

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. You are my neighbour

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honest person that's why

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think you will be good to take care of my home. I am going

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to delhi

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delhi

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Delhi

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for

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next weekend , I have

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meeting with my office members and we make

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some important documents and

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it. Some household chores like

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cleaning ,

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food

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my cat and dog and

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water to plants. If you have any kind of help call me

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text me. I am very thankful to you. Your friend Manpreet KAUR

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

107 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: •Why you want to go away • What you want your neighbor to look after • If there are any problems, then give instructions

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

1) The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More and more students choose to move to other countries to have higher education. Do you think the benefits of going abroad outweight its problems?

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

📝 TASK 2: It is the responsibility of schools to teach children good behavior in addition to providing formal education.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+