You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: •Why you want to go away • What you want your neighbor to look after • If there are any problems, then give instructions

Dear Amandeep
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, I am writing
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letter because I give you my house's
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responsibilities
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. You are my neighbour
as well as
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honest person that's why
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think you will be good to take care of my home. I am going
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delhi
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for
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next weekend , I have
my
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meeting with my office members and we make
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some important documents and
releasing
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it. Some household chores like
:
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cleaning ,
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food
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my cat and dog and
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water to plants. If you have any kind of help call me
as well as
text me. I am very thankful to you. Your friend Manpreet KAUR
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
  • however
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