You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: •Why you want to go away • What you want your neighbor to look after • If there are any problems, then give instructions

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Dear Amandeep
gill
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Gill

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, I am writing
this
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letter because I give you my house's
responsibilties
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responsibilities
responsibility

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. You are my neighbour
as well as
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

very
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a very

The noun phrase very honest person seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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honest person that's why
i
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I

The pronoun I should always be capitalized.

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think you will be good to take care of my home. I am going
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to delhi

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delhi
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Delhi

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for
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apply

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next weekend , I have
my
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a

The word my may be incorrect in this context. Consider changing it.

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meeting with my office members and we make
a
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apply

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some important documents and
releasing
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release

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it. Some household chores like
:
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apply

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cleaning ,
give
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giving

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food
for
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to

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my cat and dog and
give
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giving

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water to plants. If you have any kind of help call me
as well as
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

text me. I am very thankful to you. Your friend Manpreet KAUR
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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