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Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends. He/she has informed you that he/she will be travelling near your hometown on business in a few months’ time. Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to stay with you. In your letter, •express how pleased you are to hear from him/her •invite him/her to stay with you •tell him/her about your ideas of how you could spend some time together

#year #someone #holiday #friends #hometown #business #months’ #time #friend #•express #•invite #•tell
Hi Sam, How are you
buddy
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? I can't explain how happy I was to hear from you
on
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about
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 your upcoming trip
near
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to
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 my town. Ever since I got back from Florida, I have been thinking about you, and how fortunate I was to have found a friend like you on a surfing expedition. I cherish the memories of that vacation
everyday
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. Now that you are coming, I
inisist
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insist
 that you stay with me during your visit. I have a big and
cozy
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 house where you would feel at home, plus
its
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 not very far from your office location. I am sure we will have great fun staying together again. I remember how much you love adventure, and so I have planned
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a skiing trip to the Blue Mountains. It is going to be amazing !
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, I can't wait for you to meet my friends whom I have told so much about you, so I am hosting a dinner with them as well. I am sure you would love them all. I am so excited to have you here. See you soon Apoorva
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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