Some animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?

It is true that increasing global warming has become a pressing issue. There are a number of reasons behind

this

phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted by governments and individuals to improve the situation. In terms of reasons why the earth is getting warmer than ever before, human activities are the main causes.

Firstly

, there is an increasing concentration of carbon dioxide, being released

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our atmosphere from power plants, acting as a root of the greenhouse and leading to global warming.

Additionally

, deforestation is

also

one of the most vivid causes of increasing global temperatures. People chop down

trees

illegally for farming or other purposes

such

as accommodation or commerce, resulting in

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of balance in

diversity

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the diversity

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of fauna and flora. Because

trees

help absorb carbon dioxide in the air and supply

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oxygen for humans and animals,

thus

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climate change. Fortunately, several measures could be taken to alleviate

this

problem. The government has

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responsibilities

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to deal with

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issue. They should launch some campaigns as a way to raise

citizen’s

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citizens’

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awareness about environmental protection.

For instance

, showing them how to recycle waste or encouraging them to grow more

trees

in their living areas.

Moreover

, the government can encourage power stations and plants to use more environmentally friendly energy resources

such

as using nuclear or renewable energy

instead

of fossil fuels. In conclusion, civilians should be aware of global warming threats and contribute

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the government to overcome

this

issue by reducing toxic gasses and growing more

trees

.