nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, most countries improve their residents’ living

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through economic development, but the

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of some social values is posing an imminent threat to

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society,

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putting a strain on society’s environmental preservation and

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conservation. So from my viewpoint, I believe the disadvantages of the phenomenon outweigh the advantages. In terms of

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environmental preservation, the overwhelming commercial activities are contributing to heavy pollution

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both urban and rural areas.

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it is beneficial for governments to move industries and businesses into cities to increase their revenue and improve residents’ living efficiency, the air and noise pollution

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by construction and traffic

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destroyed

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mental state and decreased their sense of well-being. As to the

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suburban

areas, it is common to see the polluted river and vanished farmland everywhere, with the

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of beautiful

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occupied by

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disposable plastics and industrial waste. In terms of

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heritage

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conservation, the proliferation of the construction of tall buildings and transportation lines

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destructed large amounts of historical sites,

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, many infrastructure

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have been established on the local monuments

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bringing huge losses to our cultural

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behavior

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cannot be strictly restricted, the children will no longer

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of the paramount of protecting our precious cultural

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and spirit, which may

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to a vicious circle and irreversible consequences. In conclusion,

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the adverse impact on society’s environmental preservation and

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conservation, I totally hold the opinion that the drawbacks of

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sustainably developing economy outweigh the advantages of it.