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Some people say that educational success depends mostly on a good teacher. Others say it depends on the attitude of the student. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Today's society wants to know how to achieve
success
 in education. A good
teacher
 is mostly responsible for educational
success
,
according to
 some,
while
 other people believe that the focus should be on
student
 attitude. In my opinion, I believe that educational
success
 must rely on an educated
teacher
. On the one hand, some people think that educational achievement mainly depends on an excellent professor, and I agree.
To begin
 with, a good
teacher
 from different fields must have
briefly
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 knowledge
on
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of
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 their perspective fields. So,
school
 children can rely on their knowledge and learn a lot from them to become a topper in the
school
.
For instance
, a history
teacher
was become
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became
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 a good professor after they
understanding
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whole
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 concept of
the
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history.
Furthermore
,
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the student
a student
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student
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 can go to private tuition of
school
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a school
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teacher
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teachers
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, so that, they can clear their remaining doubts outside
the
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school
 hours.
On the other hand
, it is often believed that it is better if the emphasis on educational fulfilment is on
student
behavior
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. The reason is that in some schools,
due to
 less educated teachers, students are mostly depending on their own style of learning method.
Moreover
, they find their mistakes themselves and solve
it
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 without
anyone
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 help.
As a result
, they become
success
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 in
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school
.
Additionally
, many people consider that
student
 attitude towards one subject is very effectible to become
success
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a success
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 in the
school
. In conclusion,
while
 folks may vary in their opinions between a great
teacher
 and the attitude of the pupils for more
success
 in education, I think that achievement in
school
 ought to rely on a perfect
teacher
 who learns important subjects, and shares experiences
to
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 students.
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