The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkwort and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first diagram shows the stages of a
silkworm
's life cycle, Use synonyms
while
the second diagram shows the production of Linking Words
skillful
cloth.
Change the spelling
skilful
Overall
, there are four stages in the life cycle of the Linking Words
silkworm
from egg Use synonyms
silk
thread. The production of Use synonyms
silk
cloth anatomy is characterised by simple ways, commencing with water and ending with the weave.
Use synonyms
Initially
, Linking Words
egg
are laid on the underside of a leaf and remain there for ten Fix the agreement mistake
eggs
days
. Use synonyms
After
Linking Words
this
, Linking Words
silkworm
larvae usually Use synonyms
eats
leaves like mulberry leaves from the eggs and continue in that form for between 4 to 6 weeks. Change the verb form
eat
At the end
of the 10 Linking Words
days
, the Use synonyms
silk
thread Use synonyms
stage
Use synonyms
remain
there for another 3 to 8 Change the verb form
remains
days
and Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
create
an oval cocoon on the backside of a leaf . Correct subject-verb agreement
creates
After
Linking Words
this
, the cocoon Linking Words
stage
lasts for around 16 Use synonyms
days
and they become Use synonyms
moth
in the final Fix the agreement mistake
moths
stage
. Use synonyms
At the end
of Linking Words
this
Linking Words
stage
, the moths Use synonyms
emerges
and the life cycle starts again.
The second diagram shows Change the verb form
emerge
that
the production of Correct word choice
apply
silk
cloth ,which Use synonyms
have
five stages.Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Initially
, the Linking Words
silk
thread of the Use synonyms
silkworm
is selected and Use synonyms
then
boiled in the next Linking Words
stage
. After boiling in water the threads are unwinded and they are often 300 to 900 Use synonyms
meter
. Fix the agreement mistake
meters
Then
these are twisted and dyed and Linking Words
finally
, those are weaved to Linking Words
silk
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "after this, at the end, initially".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words silkworm, silk, days, stage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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