Proper function of prison is to punish criminals and life in prison should be hard. Do you agree or disagree?

An offender should be punished for the

crime

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he

commited

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committed

that is

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what

law

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the law

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says but in my view putting them behind

the

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bars and

to make

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making

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their life miserable should not be the only motto of their

punishment

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. Since it will adversely affect their mindset and they will not turn into a good

person

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in society.

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for my belief

is

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are

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explained in the following paragraph. We live in a society which is ruled by the law and

if

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apply

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any

person

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that commits an offence ought to be punished.

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, I believe that motive of

a

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punitive action is to bring a positive change in a lawbreaker. Sometimes few persons are sentenced

jail

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to jail

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for a small

crime

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but in

jail

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they are ill-treated in jail. Not only they are made to wash

clothes

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the clothes

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of their inmates but

also

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beaten up by police for no reason.

Niether

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Neither

they are allowed to make friends nor they can talk to family.

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kind of behaviour with them is what

inspire

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them to commit more

crime

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in future as it fills them with anger.

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, Dawood was caught in a case of

street

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a street

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brawl, he was put behind

the

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apply

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bars for six months during which he was tortured by police and

other criminal

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another criminal

other criminals

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which made him

to

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apply

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kill persons including a head constable. If a

person

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a treated well during his

punishment

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period he might have a change of heart that can make him a good

person

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. There have been measures taken up by

few

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a few

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government

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governments

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regarding

this

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. One of

it's

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its

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kind

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kinds

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is that

,

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apply

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a prisoner is allowed to study during his

punishment

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period.

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will not only help him to complete his study but

also

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it

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helps him to get rid of evils within him.

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, Raju Pandey was allowed to complete his degree

of

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in

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Law and today he is a very

well known

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well-known

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lawyer who fights for

rights

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the rights

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of poor people free of

the

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apply

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costs

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. In conclusion, though no

crime

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should go unpunished, the severity of

punishment

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should not make a

person

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to

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apply

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fall

in

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into

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trap

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the trap

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of

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crime

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the crime

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world.

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of punishing an offender harshly, they should be treated with harmony so they can become a good human being for society.