some people say that, the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particuar species of plants and animals, others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years human has faced with
wide
range of environmental issues. Some Add an article
a wide
individual
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individuals
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are concern
concern
about Replace the word
concerned
shortage
of specific Add an article
the shortage
a shortage
fauana
and flora as Correct your spelling
fauna
a
main reason Correct article usage
the
while
others belive
that environmental problems are more important. in Correct your spelling
believe
essay
would Add an article
the essay
an essay
discussboth
views and argue the Correct your spelling
discuss both
favour
side.
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favoured
On the other hand
, as perspective
of people, who claim that the fewer plants and animals, the more environmental problems. Add an article
the perspective
a perspective
it is clear that
as certain species decline in numbers, the ecosystem is thrown out of balance and actually maintaining the balance of Correct article usage
the ecosysytem
ecosysytem
is Correct your spelling
ecosystem
ecosystems
essentila
for the earth and human. in Correct your spelling
essential
fact
loss of Add a comma
,fact
fuana
and flora can affect Correct your spelling
fauna
on
medical research and Change preposition
apply
development
of treatment, and in terms of essentialCorrect article usage
the development
for
, we should protect fauna and flora to prevent Change preposition
apply
of
soil Change preposition
apply
erossion
or flood. Correct your spelling
erosion
as
Correct your spelling
As
result
of Correct article usage
a result
shortage
of species and animals we can say Add an article
a shortage
the shortage
over fishing
cause a lack of biodiversity in the Correct your spelling
overfishing
ocans
, or Correct your spelling
oceans
ocean
due to
industry, growing human popullaion
and Correct your spelling
population
populations
agrixalture
, more land needed. Correct your spelling
agriculture
on the other
hand
there are more considerable issues we have to tackleAdd a comma
,hand
with
. Change preposition
apply
Dangers
of global warming and climate change threaten the earth very Correct article usage
The dangers
serious
. in Change the adjective
seriously
the
other words, heavy air polluted Correct article usage
apply
from
greenhouse gases Change preposition
by
contributs
to Earth's temperature rise and sea levels rise as well. Correct your spelling
contributes
contribute
in
fact those consequences exist from some humans or individuals activities Correct your spelling
In
such
as deforestation or excessive consumption of fuel.
In conclusion, although
some people put Correct article usage
a llack
llack
of biodiversity Correct your spelling
lack
black
firstly
or as a main reason , some environmental issues like global warming and climate change have more priority and we should Change the word
first
aware
of Add a missing verb
be aware
this
problems and do something effective.Correct determiner usage
these
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion