some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world, subject like science and technology are more important than History. Disucss both view.

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have always included

History

,

Science

and

Technology

as

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compulsory learning subject in school. It is often argued that

history

is more crucial compared to the other subjects mentioned.

However

, as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far

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concerned, I truly feel that both subjects played a major role in

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student development and the future as well.

Firstly

, children often learn

history

from a textbook that contained different

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of events during the past.

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this

approach,

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allows

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the kid

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kid

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to

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a

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broaden their understanding of the country.

Secondly

, children might have the potential to become

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country

leader

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.

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, it is important for them to avoid repeating and

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the same error by historical

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during the past in the future. Moving forward, lots of people mention that

science

and

technology

are

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interesting

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compared to

history

and

this

manages to keep up the passion of study to

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their own subject and lead to a better performance

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test

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. Not only

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but

also

people often gain higher job

opportunity

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compared to

history

as

science

and

technology

are highly

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in

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society.

Not to mention

, all life aspects

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with both of them.

For example

, the invention process of

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vaccine that saved millions of

live

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require

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both

science

and

technology

to make it

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. In conclusion,

according to

the examples and argument given, I personally prefer that

science

and

technology

are more beneficial and interesting to learn compared to

history

whereas

history

do provide various important value which is valuable to learn in the past.