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Is formal eamnianations are the only effective way to assess students grade. Or there is other way to assess students performance with course work and team project. Do you agree or disagree?

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I agree to a certain degree with the statement “
examinations
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 are the only effective way to assess
students
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”.
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 is not the best and most optimum to
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students
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 performance and
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grade
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. The reason behind
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 not every single
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 is the same and they have different traits.
Firstly
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 formal examinations
works
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 well because formal examinations set a standard
to
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 something to
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from
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 if they don’t have anything to
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 everything will be hard.
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 to that formal examination can show proof
improvements
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 and deterioration that can be used as
learning
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 experience. But
on the other
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hand
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 formal education is too restrictive to be the only
things
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 that matter. Take art as an example, art is really hard to qualify if
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 good or
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 it
need
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 more information and context to
being
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 graded.
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Additionally
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 sport is the most apparent case of grading will not tell the whole story of the quality of the
students
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 and what they can
be excel
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.
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 Few
students
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 have
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the gifted
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 ability to have
a good communication skills
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 which will
benefitted
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 the tutee to excel in
group
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 project that sometimes is not counted in the final
grade
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. Or
students
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 that
does
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 better in personal coursework
cause
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 you gave the scholar more freedom to express themselves in
coherence
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a coherence
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 and cohesion fashion that should be graded higher. In
conclusion
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 formal assessment is still necessary for the majority
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students
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of students
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. The reason behind
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 most
of
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the students
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 will not
found
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 what they excel
from
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early
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 age,
because
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of
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that formal assessment will
helped
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 them to have
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a goal
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goal
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goals
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 to chase before founding their true talent and what they excel that. But on the
otherhand
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other hand
 if the
students
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 have been showing their talent in a specific field that they clearly head and shoulder above the competition is better to
grade
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 them based on what they
best
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 at. Formal assessment is still needed and
be
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 the standard to
grade
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 most
students
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