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More and more people are using the internet to contact existing friends and even make new friends. Some people are of the opinion that this has strengthened relationships between existing friends, whilst others think the opposite is true. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, there are a lot of
people
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 who are daily using technology for contacting other
people
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, not only someone they knew but
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, to make new
relationships
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. There is a group of
people
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 who believe that the habit of meeting new individuals through the
Internet
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 makes
relationships
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 stronger
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 others think the contrary. The following essay shows arguments for both statements and I will give a point of view on why I agree with the first . Undoubtedly,
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change resistance is the key reason to opine that contacting friends throughout the net makes
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. Normally,
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 kind of perspective is given to the elderly who do not know how to use the
Internet
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 properly.
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, they can not approve of new social trends because they tend to believe theirs are better.
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, grandparents usually say to new generations how their epoch was the best and young
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 are “losing values”,
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 of trying to understand the new technologies.
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, distant
relationships
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 have always been here, new technologies like the
internet
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, got to improve them.
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, nowadays we can make more things in an easier way than before. Proof of
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, it is possible to compare how unlike some years ago, when
people
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 sent cards to distant ones.
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, we normally send not only cards, but
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 emails, chats, photos, and videos and even we are capable of making real-time video calls.
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,
people
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 can communicate with each other in a better way and even make new contacts via the
Internet
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. To summarize, the
internet
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 has allowed
people
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 to improve their
relationships
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 by making it easier to communicate between them.
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, the change resistance and ignorance make some groups believe that social interactions have become weak than before
instead
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 of getting the benefits from it.
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