Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants, while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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In the modern era, a part of society feels better to get
meals
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from the stores
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, others prefer to eat their own prepared
food
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at
home
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. Well,
according to
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my homemade
food
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is the better option to eat but others reject the notion. So, I will explain the reason behind both in upcoming paragraphs and
thus
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will lead to a logical conclusion as well.
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with,
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there are myriad
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reasons to support my opinion but the most prominent one is that household
food
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is more rich in nutrients and proteins because it is prepared by keeping in mind all the basic needs of the body. To exemplify,
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some individuals have the problem of high
colesterol
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cholesterol
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,
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according to
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this
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they need an intake of less oily
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which could be prepared at
home
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only not at
restaurants
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. As it is a common saying that 'Health is Wealth' so hand
meals
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are better for maintaining a healthy lifestyle and getting rid of diseases.
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, the
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that is
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cooked at house is cost-efficient in comparison to outside
food
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taken from
the
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restaurants
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. For illustration, it is quite astonishing that one coffee at Tim Hortons costs about $3 but it is better to spend $5 on the 3 bags of milk and prepare coffee at
home
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furthermore
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, that milk
last
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for 4-5 days to make tea or coffee.
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, it is better to spend less money because nowadays, males and females are burning
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at midnight to have a healthy and wealthy life. On the flip, few bodies support the former view and the foremost reason behind
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is that
food
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at
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restaurants
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is available easily without any hard work as every individual is having a very hectic schedule because of which they do not have enough time to cook
meals
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for them and their family
therefore
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, they buy from outside.
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, there are certain
restaurants
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in my area which are providing
home
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tiffin service so, that
food
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should be available at the easy access to everybody. Another reason for not cooking at
home
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could be to having the craving of eating a variety of
food
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from every different family member which is not possible to do at
home
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at the same time
thus
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, people go and eat outside.
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, Indian children like to eat
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Chinese
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food
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while
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the
youngters
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youngsters
like to have some healthy veggie
food
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.
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,
restaurants
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are the best possible places to fulfil these demands.
To conclude
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, rather than eating outside I would prefer to eat
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homemade healthy and fresh
meals
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only by keeping in mind the health necessities.

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