Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants, while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the modern era, a part of society feels better to get
meals
from the stores
whereas
, others prefer to eat their own prepared
food
at
home
. Well,
according to
my homemade
food
is the better option to eat but others reject the notion. So, I will explain the reason behind both in upcoming paragraphs and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion as well.
To begin
with,
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there are myriad
of
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reasons to support my opinion but the most prominent one is that household
food
is more rich in nutrients and proteins because it is prepared by keeping in mind all the basic needs of the body. To exemplify,
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some individuals have the problem of high
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cholesterol
hence
,
according to
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this
they need an intake of less oily
food
which could be prepared at
home
only not at
restaurants
. As it is a common saying that 'Health is Wealth' so hand
meals
are better for maintaining a healthy lifestyle and getting rid of diseases.
Moreover
, the
food
that is
cooked at house is cost-efficient in comparison to outside
food
taken from
the
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restaurants
. For illustration, it is quite astonishing that one coffee at Tim Hortons costs about $3 but it is better to spend $5 on the 3 bags of milk and prepare coffee at
home
furthermore
, that milk
last
for 4-5 days to make tea or coffee.
Thus
, it is better to spend less money because nowadays, males and females are burning
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at midnight to have a healthy and wealthy life. On the flip, few bodies support the former view and the foremost reason behind
this
is that
food
at
the
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restaurants
is available easily without any hard work as every individual is having a very hectic schedule because of which they do not have enough time to cook
meals
for them and their family
therefore
, they buy from outside.
For instance
, there are certain
restaurants
in my area which are providing
home
tiffin service so, that
food
should be available at the easy access to everybody. Another reason for not cooking at
home
could be to having the craving of eating a variety of
food
from every different family member which is not possible to do at
home
at the same time
thus
, people go and eat outside.
For example
, Indian children like to eat
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food
while
the
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youngsters
like to have some healthy veggie
food
.
Hence
,
restaurants
are the best possible places to fulfil these demands.
To conclude
, rather than eating outside I would prefer to eat
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homemade healthy and fresh
meals
only by keeping in mind the health necessities.

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