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The chart shows the hours per week spent watching TV by gender and by age group in 2001 in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the hours per week spent watching TV by gender and by age group in 2001 in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the bar graph illustrates the number of
hours
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 spent watching
tv
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 per week by females and males in different
age
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 groups in Australia in the year 2001.
overall
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,
while
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 youngsters spend a huge amount of time watching television in the surveyed year, only a meagre portion of those aged 36-45 utilized
this
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 device.
to begin
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 with, girls aged under 15 head the list with over 25
hours
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 of watching television,
whereas
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this
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 figure for men was 15-25
age
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 bracket, accounting for roughly 20
hours
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. the number of
hours
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 boys under 15 years old spent on
tv
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 was 15
hours
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, which was 5
hours
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 lower than the category of women aged 15-25.
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, the amount of time spent watching
tv
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 in the 26-35 and 46-55
age
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 brackets was relatively similar at 15
hours
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 and 17
hours
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 in terms of males and females, respectively. in the 36-45
age
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 bracket, 10
hours
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 were spent watching
tv
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 by men in comparison with only approximately 8
hours
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 in the women's category. those aged over 55 used
tv
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 frequently with females( 20
hours
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) and males ( 16
hours
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).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, tv, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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