The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. • You should write at least 150 words. • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart compares the annual heart
attacks
affecting men
and women
of different age groups in the United States.
Overall
, it is evident from the bar graph that more men
than women
are affected by the condition in the US, it is also
clear that with both genders heart attacks
increase with ageing.
To begin
, men
of 65 years and above perked the chart with 440 thousand
males experiencing the illness yearly, their counterparts also
had a significant figure of 374 thousand
women
getting attacks
. Furthermore
, males between the ages of 45-64 years were the second category heart attacks
were popular with 424 thousand
of
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men
, their number was more than double the figure of their counterparts.
In contrast
, a negligible figure of 3 thousand
women
was recorded for females between the ages range 29-44 years whereas
men
of the same ages had 123 thousands of them being affected by that illness per annum in the US.Submitted by yeboahsamuellaabban on
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