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ome people with a good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What are the problems caused by this?

#ome #people #education #field #move #work
In
this
 modern world, youngsters move aboard after pursuing their degree
in
particular
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 stream or after getting enough experience to
work
 in
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an interested
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interested
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 area because they think that doing
work
 in foreign countries will value their
work
 in
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a more
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more
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better way than it is done in
home
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their home
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country
. There are chances of raising problems in future and
reason
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the reason
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 behind it will be discussed
further
. Employees with highly accomplished experience in
work
 with academic
qualification
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qualifications
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 and practical skills migrate to other nations for
better
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a better
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 future as they can get satisfactory
salary
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salaries
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 and social security after retirement by
government
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the government
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 which can be provided to them in their
country
.
Furthermore
, some
people
 are there with more creative and productive ideas but they are not properly recognised by the
government
 so they are not able to get
benefitted
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 job opportunities with promotion.
For instance
, there are overseas
government
who
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 provides pension after retirement even if that person is not having
government
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 job.
On the contrary
, problems can be raised by the migration of skilled and experienced
people
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 foreign countries. There can be
shortage
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a shortage
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 of proficient workers in their
country
 for growth and
lack
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a lack
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 of experience
on
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field
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the field
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 because experts are the
one
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ones
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 who can pass on their knowledge to their colleagues for brain development.
Besides
, future
generation
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generations
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 can be in
wrong
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the wrong
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 hands if
majority
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the majority
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 of educated
people
 will go abroad to settle over there.
For example
, if most of the jobholders of
top
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the top
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 position will go out of their
country
then
 there will minimum number of tutors with
maximum
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a maximum
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 number of learners in society.
To conclude
, specialized persons are altering to different parts of the world for quality of life and better
work
 opportunities.
However
,
people
 leaving their host
country
 is not a good sign in any way.
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