Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. what problems does this shortage case? what measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

People have paid more and more attention to the global

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water

shortage issue.

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problem might be caused by the following reasons.

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industrial pollution from plants has increased dramatically.

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pollution may happen in one region but eventually will impact neighbours or areas far away. It affects all the nature eco cycle on the earth.

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, chemistry factories if exceed emissions standards will cause disaster to the surrounding drinking system. ,

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the Indiscriminate hunting activity towards rivers and oceans has driven tremendous

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life to extinction. Nature

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circle is facing a man-made destruction situation, which as a payback freshwater drink resources become limited. Human activities have disturbed the peace of ocean and river recycling mechanisms. More and more fish are vanishing from our planet. To tackle the issue it's never too late that realize it and take action in global cooperation. On one

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it's become urgent and necessary to set a global standard of industrial emissions and supervised strictly. Any violation shall be heavily compensated until people are fully aware of the problem. On the other ,hand setting restrictions on ocean/river hunting is essential to conduct worldwide to protect the

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lives. People should respect nature and interfere less with the other species' eco cycle.

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, no hunting activity during the breeding season. Only by raising full awareness of the link between human activity and natural turnback can we solve

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problem in a world manner.It will benefit

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all the citizens living on Earth.