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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
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The bar charts
represents
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represent
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 the figures
of
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for
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 graduate and postgraduate
students
remained
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who remained
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 without
full-time
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a full-time
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 position after finishing
their
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apply
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college in
UK
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the UK
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 around 2008.
Overall
, it's evident that patterns for both categories are similar.
Also
,
future
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the future
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 study was considered to be the most important option,
while
 voluntary
work
 was the least popular one. In 2008,
the
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apply
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further
 study
was
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estimated 29,665 graduate UK
students
, being almost three times higher than the figure
of
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for
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 part-time
work
.
However
, the former for postgraduates was 2,725 people,
the
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and the
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 number of
students
picked
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who picked
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 part-time
work
 was 2535, being almost the same. Unemployment and voluntary
work
 were similar for both types of
students
.The figure for
further
 study accounted for
third
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the third
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 part of
student
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the student
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 number,
while
vuluntary
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voluntary
work
, being the least popular choice, comprised only one-sixth of the total amount.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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