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The bar charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The bar charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
#bar #show #uk #graduate #students #work #college
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represents
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a
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apply
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data about four types of occupation of
graduate
 or postgraduate
students
 that did not have a qualified
work
 by finishing college in 2008. It’s notable
from
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the
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apply
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first glance that
both
students
 preferred mostly
futher
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further
 study, and
that
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the
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 figure of
graduate
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a graduate
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student
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students
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 is much more than postgraduate
students
. The most unpopular option among
both
students
 was voluntary
work
, making up 3500
graduate
students
 and only 345 postgraduate
students
.
Other
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The other
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 two destinations (
further
work
, unemployment) are the same
by
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both
students
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student's
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 choices,
however
postgraduated
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postgraduate
post graduated
students
 most likely select part-time
work
,
while
graduate
students
 are not keen on
this
 occupation.
Part time
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work
 among postgraduate people was almost as popular as
further
 study, having about 200
students
 difference.
Further
 study and unemployment were samely popular for
both
students
 by proportion , just as voluntary
work
, figures of these 3 destinations among
postgraduated
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postgraduate
postgraduates
post graduated
 are 10 timed less between
graduate
students
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduate, students, work, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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