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Many employers believe that good social skills are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job, so they are employing people who are with good social skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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One of the most contentious issues in recent times has been that employers only hire workers with excellent social
skills
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 because they believe that they are more likely to succeed in their jobs.
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, the real question is: are social
skills
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 the only basis for a person to succeed in their
work
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? What are the other factors that an employer should consider when hiring a
worker
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?
To begin
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, social
skills
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 are a person's ability to communicate with other people, particularly in the workplace. It is
also
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 defined as a
worker
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's ability to interact not just verbally but
also
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 in writing.
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, social
skills
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 are not the only basis for defining success in doing a task. There are other
skills
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 that are as important as the traditional communication
skills
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 that a
worker
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 should need. In fact, they might be more important than just social
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.
For instance
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, intangible
skills
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. These are a set of
skills
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 that are not apparent on a resume or even during a face-to-face interview. It is a
worker
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's character, traits, and personality.
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, there are other factors that employers take into consideration when hiring a
worker
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. One main factor is exhibiting optimism towards
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 and colleagues. Positive-thinking employees create a workplace
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 free from stress and chaos.
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, when going through tough times at
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,optimistic people see the brighter side
instead
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 of just focusing on the problem.
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, enthusiasm for
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 leads to better
work
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 ethics. Workers show up on time, sometimes stay late, and
work
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 harder in order to show devotion to their
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. To summarize, I personally disagree that social
skills
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 are the only factor defining success in the workplace. There are other
skills
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 that are as important as good qualifications for hiring. Some of these are intangible
skills
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, like being optimistic and having strong
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